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amaterasu

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This is an on going Fan Fiction that is pretty much the Zelda Art's Zelda RPG in story form. The link that you can find it in is here. http://zeldadungeon.net/forum/showthread.php?18692-Zelda-RPG It also has the chapters of the story, but this one has them all in one place. I will try to post one chapter per week, or post a chapter if people are begging for the next segment. Enjoy! (Please keep all comments clean and apropriate, I would love feedback on how to make the story better, or just regular comments and compliments. Thank You.)

Here's the character list everybody!


The Legend Of Zelda

Characters From Game:

Link

Zelda

Gannon

RPG Characters:

Tennor (played by DekuNut), Hero of the Great Bay. A 26-year-old male Zora, Tennor is tall and skinny with the normal Zora coloring. He is 6 foot 7 with blue eyes. He’s self-centered and always believes “fans” are stalking him. Always trying to lead, Tennor went slightly crazy after a battle with the Second Demon to attack the Great Bay. Tennor lost some of his sanity, but did manage to keep most of it. At times, he has no memory of anything, and he attacks wildly until his mind clicks back into place. He carries a small satchel. He has razor fins and a Gilded Sword he has named the Hero’s Sword. Left Behind from the Hero of Termina. He also has a boomerang. After Link left Termina, another creature attacked Great Bay, and was killed by Tennor, giving him his title. He was told the story of the great Hero of Termina, AKA Link, and set out for find him to protect Termina. After many years, he came upon a man who never lost his smile, who told him that the Hero had returned to his homeland, Hyrule. Following the man’s directions, Tennor entered Hyrule, only to find it a grey wasteland. Infuriated, he entered the tavern and found a group defeat the Tyrant King who had taken over. Tennor joined them.

Sephira Phoenix, AKA Sarah or Sphey (played by Elevenknight). A 17-year-old athletic female Hylian who is 5 foot 6 inches. Her parents died when she was young, leaving her to look after her younger brother. Upon hearing Ganondorf’s rise to power, she swore to end him, so as to allow her brother to grow up without looking over his shoulder for danger. She is paler than most Hylians, and often chews on her blonde braid when she thinks, as well as understands animal warning calls. With crystal blue eyes, she wears a blue tunic with black pants, red fingerless gloves, and a matching belt around her waist, as well as a blue belt from her shoulder to her waist. She uses twin swords, a blue one on her right shoulder, and a red one on the right side of her waist. Bow and arrows with a quiver hanging from her left shoulder, the bow is decorated with red flames and blue tears. She is quick to laugh and smile, slow to anger, but when she is angered, she has a destructive temper. She’s stubborn to a fault, and makes friends easily, loyal to them until the end.

Arthur Helnrivian Dorithas Thappleson IV (played by LinkThe8th), AKA the Zora Boy and The Great Tinkerer is a 15 year old male Hylian. He used to be classified as a Zora, and he constantly jabbers Zora language rapidly. He is 6 foot 8 inches, incredibly pale, slim, and graceful. His eyes are black as night and good for underwater viewing. He wears a tan wool trench coat-like jacket over a forest green tunic with brown trousers. He’s very good with magic, mostly illusions. He Sports a Kokiri Sword he uses as a dagger, a wand, and a sword he uses as a walking cane. Aurthur looks like a 1600’s Englishman. Pale, smart, and incredibly polite. He met Link at the tender age of 10 near Lake Hylia, when he still thought he was a Zora. Link, determined to win the argument, put a mirror in front of Arthur. Believing he didn’t belong, he joined Link on his adventure to defeat Ganondorf. When Link was imprisoned, Ganon turned to Arthur and attacked. Sword spinning out of his hand, Arthur was defenseless, but was just realizing his magic potential. Teleporting away, he spent the next five years underground, planning a rebellion against Gannon. Today’s adventure is the fruit of his labor.

Kaleb (played by Kaleb Dampf) is an 18-year-old male Hylian. He is 6 feet 2 inches, and is built strong like an ox. Tan skin and blue eyes, he can do a mean Steven Tyler impression. He dresses like a seafarer, and uses 2 swords, 4 knives, and one longer sword. Kaleb is pretty likeable, but can be hard to get along with.

Jacob Kal (played by Zelda64) is a 22-year-old male Hylian, nicknamed Guardian of the Innocent. He is 7 feet 4 inches, and is a little muscular. His skin color is between white and tan, and he has brown eyes. Jacob can understand Gorons’ Language and is beginning to learn a little fire magic. He wears a black tunic, and uses a sword. He’s always Serious. Finding out at the young age of 9 that he was adopted, Jacob ran away and now roams the country of Hyrule.

Amaterasu (played by Amaterasu) is a 15-year-old female Zora, who is sometimes called Ammy, and most often times referred to as the Zora Outcast. She is skinny, 5 feet 6 inches, and even when she seems tired, she really isn’t. She has the regular Zora colors, but they are a slightly darker shade, which sticks out a lot if you’re a Zora. Amaterasu hatched late, and was always shunned for being darker than most Zora. Hated in every way, Ammy grabbed her bow and quiver, and roams Hyrule looking for acceptance. From the Gerudo’s Fortress to Death Mountain to Lake Hylia, and everywhere in between. She has deep brown eyes, and can understand and respond in any language. She has great ninja skills, but most often times doesn’t show them off. Amterasu can “Water Bend” and uses bow and arrow as well as Zora Boomerangs. Deadly aim with both, it is rare that she misses. She is pretty quiet most of the time, but can be funny and witty at times.


Chapter I
Attack! Attack!

In a dark, dingy tavern, the small group of rebels against Ganon met each other, eating a hearty dinner. There are few other customers, and the bartender only stands staring at the wall, humming a song he calls “Saria’s Song”. The group takes up a small corner of the tavern, talking quietly. Arthur tells a story about Link, and most everybody listens intently.

Arthur stuck a huge helping of Poe Meat into his mouth. Mouth full, he attempted to say something that sounded like; “I haven’t eaten like this is a long time!

Tennor had a small dish of sushi, but was more interested in the story that Arthur was telling. “And then?” He asked.
Sephira was also eager to hear more, though she hid it better. Living as an adult for a couple years would do that to you. She spooned down her stew, wishing Arthur would get to the point.


Jacob on the other hand was too busy stuffing himself to be eager about hearing from Arthur.

“And that,” Arthur said in an impression of the elderly innkeeper, “Is why I never eat Bologna.” In his normal voice he added, “Hey Tennor, I’m glad you said you’re paying for all this.” Hoping the Zora was having another memory blackout.

“Huh? Oh, Yeah, of course,” Tennor said. “So, when are we going to leave?”
“We should be leaving in about—"

Suddenly, a Gerudo bandit’s knife impaled the wall about 5 millimeters from Arthur’s face, as with Tennor and Saphira, only with arrows instead of knives.


Arthur gulped. Sephira’s first reaction was to look for her attacker. Dodging more incoming projectiles, she drew her twin swords, and used them to shield her face from further arrows. Still unable to see where the attackers were. Glancing at her companions, she saw they were safe.
“I don’t see them.” She reported.

Jacob stopped eating and looked around. Suddenly, snapping to his right a little, he caught an arrow. “They are closing in!” he shouted in Goron. Switching to Hylian, he again shouted, “They are getting closer!” This time everybody understood.


Tennor stood and laughed, “This is what I live for!” He drew his sword and started running toward the place where the arrows came from.

Sephira mutter under her breath. No one dashes head long into an enemy’s place without having some sort of plan or back up. She followed him more slowly, her swords twirling to deflect further arrows.

Jacob growled. They never learn to stop terrorizing people! He thought to himself as he unsheathed his sword and followed Sephira.


Amaterasu, coming from the restroom, had just realized the fight and readied an arrow in her bow, taking cover in a nearby booth. Arthur smiled. Pointing his wand towards the door, careful not to hit any of his colleagues, he yelled a single word.

“Lothemir!” The Gerudos appeared instantly, completely paralyzed. “That is how you handle a job.”
He motioned for the others to follow, and walked out of the tavern with a luxurious stride. Lowering her bow, Amaterasu dropped her bow back into her quiver with a sigh and followed.


“Ten inch steel and iron arrows are no match for a guy with a wand at his side.” Arthur said with a smirk.

Sephira rolled her eyes. “If of course he can get to that wand. And knows how to use it.” She followed him outside. “So what’s the plan?”

Tennor walked near the back of the group, disappointed. “Ahh…”

Ignoring Tennor, Arthur said, “You know, what Link was hunting for before Ganon? The Triforce. Lucky for us, no one’s claimed it yet. And we have a lead. The downside, it involves a giant octorok and an underground cave. Under an active volcano. Keese juice?” he asked, offering Jacob a flagon.


Sephira started to get excited. “An Octorok? Under an active volcano? When do we start?” she almost shouted.

Jacob sighed. “Since I have a good reason to go, I guess I’m going with you guys.”

“Great.” Arthur said, glancing at his Terminian pocket watch resembling the Clock Town Clock. “We start…. Now.” Glancing back at the deflated Zora he inquired, “Hey, Tennor, are you coming with?”

With a yawn, Amaterasu paid the tab herself. She checked her wallet. “Well. I only have seven rupees left.”
She went outside for a few minutes and sliced the grass with her Zora Boomerangs. “Hmm, let’s see… Bombs, Arrows, Magic, 4 Green Rupees, and nothing.” She pocked the Rupees, tossed the arrows in her quiver, and put the bombs in one of the side pockets of her quiver.


“Hey Ammy!” Arthur said, “I’ll pay ya 50 Rupees if you can figure out a way to get Tennor to stop randomly slicing us to ribbons every few hours!”

“On it.” She said, pulling out a small pocket watch. She held it in front of Tennor’s eyes and slowly began to swing it. “Tennor,” she said in a relaxed, soothing voice. “You will listen to me now. When I snap my fingers, you will follow these very specific instructions I’m giving you.” Sending Tennor into a trance, Amaterasu moved the watch slightly to keep it swinging.


“When you wake up, you will NOT remember this session. When you wake up, you will continue to have blackouts, but you will realize when you’re about to have one. You will continue to walk with a blank expression on your face until it is over. You will follow everybody’s specific instructions until you wake up. If they tell you do the Hokey Pokey, you do it. You will not remember anything during you blackouts.” With a loud snap of her fingers, Ammy woke up Tennor, and put away her pocket watch. She then took a satisfied gulp as she swallowed a fish whole.
“Mmm. So good.”


“Alright, here.” Arthur said, digging in his own wallet and giving Amaterasu 50 Rupees.

Sephira was practically bouncing with impatience, though she tried hard to hide it. She had learned to do so when she took over raising her brother Xavier. She fiddled with her pendant while waiting for Arthur to lead the way. She could guess that the active volcano was Death Mountain, but wasn’t certain. Otherwise, she would’ve walked off on her own. Amaterasu yawned.

“Are we going or are we going to wait for the New Year? I think we should rest before we go. Just a little rest, like one night at the Inn? Then Tennor and I could go catch some fish for breakfast?” She stretched and scratched the back of her neck.


Sephira scowled. She didn’t want to wait a night. She wanted to go. The sooner the better, if it meant her brother could sleep safely at night. She sighed. She was acting like a child again. She could sleep when she was told, not when she felt like it, something she was still learning.

She turned to Amaterasu. “Sure, a good night’s sleep will do us wonders. If you make that fish for lunch instead of breakfast, I can make us eggs and bacon. I could probably do some orange juice with it.” She offered, wanting to show-off her skills as a chef. She mentally kicked herself as she realized she wanted to show-off, but didn’t take back what she said. She liked cooking.
“I’ve never had eggs and bacon. I bet it tastes good.” Amaterasu smiled, always willing to try something new. “You guys go find a room. Meet here in about an hour, and I’ll catch two fish for everybody.”

She grabbed some bottles, knowing she’d have to cram a few fish in one bottle, plus water to keep them alive until the were ready to be eaten. She found some vines and strung the bottles together, then tied the vine around her quiver. They jingled slightly when she walked.

Jacob yawned. “I think I’m going to bed. See you guys in the morning.” As Jacob started walking towards his room, he reviewed his life so far. Am I ready for this next mission? He thought to himself.
 
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Chapter II
Moan…. Moan…
When Sephy and Amaterasu go fishing, they find more than just a beautiful sunset and plentiful fish…
Amaterasu headed to the small pond near the Tavern. “I’ll be back within half an hour. Maybe sooner if somebody wants to help me.” She said, hoping somebody would at least stay on the land to put the fish in the bottles.

“I’ll help.” Sephira volunteered. She liked helping people, though she wasn’t sure how she would help with fishing. Helping is a good way to make money to feed herself and her brother. She had learned a variety of skills this way. Her swordsmanship classes had been rewards for good helping, and she had learned her archery while hunting for an elderly couple near her house.


“Thanks. All you have to do is shove the fish I give you into the bottles. Make sure to fill the bottles with water before you put the fish in, and don’t let them flop out of your hands. It’s best to hold them by the gills or by the tail. Don’t worry about injuring them, they’ll only last for a few days, and we’re going to eat them tomorrow. I’ll stay in the water and grab fish. Then pop back up and give them to you.” Ammy felt more at home in the water. Before she left Zora’s Domain, she would often swim around Lord Jabu-Jabu, talking to him. When Ruto came to feed him, she hid behind some rocks. When she left, Amaterasu would come right back out and continue to talk to Lord Jabu-Jabu as he ate.


Sephira nodded. She never had attempted anything with fish, not even eat them. She suspected they’d taste good though. She filled the bottles with water and waited for Amaterasu to pop up with fish. She allowed her thoughts to wander as she waited. She wondered how her brother Xavier was doing. Was he in bed like he should be? Or on another night ramble? She hoped that if he was on a ramble, he brought the boy he was staying with him. Xavier had a habit of getting into trouble with his rambles, and Joshua had enough of a level head that he would stop Xavier. Sephira leaned back, continuing to contemplate.


It didn’t take long for the two to get all the fish into bottles. Amaterasu climbed out of the water and grabbed her quiver. “Ah fishing. How much more peaceful could it get?” She said to Sephy.

She grinned. “I can think of one thing better. Painting. Especially something as beautiful as that.” She pointed to the remains of the sunset on the clouds. “When the sun has just gone below the horizon and the stars are just starting to peak out. Ah.” Sephira sighed blissfully. “The most peaceful time of day.”


“Ah. The feeling of pure bliss.” Amaterasu said. Then, her eyes widened as she heard a familiar moan. “Sarah… We have to leave… Now!” Ammy said, grabbing her arm and pulling her toward the Inn.

“Huh? Why, what’s wrong?” Sephira asked as Ammy pulled her towards the Inn. Then the moan repeated itself. She heard it this time, though she didn’t quite recognize it. She picked up her pace anyway, not wanting to leave somebody lying around hurt.
 
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I guess here's Chapter 3. Sure wish somebody would tell sombody else about this or actually post a comment...

Chapter III
ReDeads and Gibdos
In the-slightly-cleaner-than-the-Tavern Inn, the rebels met once again for the night. The Inn is surrounded by strange new enemies. One that moans and groans. These new enemies surround the Inn, and the rebels must fight them off.


When the two got inside the Inn, Amaterasu locked the door and barricaded it with a few tables, checking all the window’s locks as well.
“ReDeads and Gibdos Sarah. ReDeads and Gibdos. I have no idea why they’re here, but I’d rather not get raped by a zombie that bites my head.” Ammy explained. Checking out the blinds, she saw the Gibdos and ReDeads just kinda stumbling around, occasionally screaming at each other.



Tennor opened his window and sent out his boomerang, decapitating one of the ReDeads before shutting and locking his window. He had a plan, but he hadn’t expected to need it so early. He scrambled beneath the bunk to find the case he had placed there.

Amaterasu too used her boomerangs. She got up to a second story window where the zombies couldn’t get to, and opened it wide. Looking out the window, she carefully aimed and decapitated 2 Gibdos and a ReDead. Then she placed some of the bombs she had onto a couple of arrows and fired one at a large group of Gibdos, sending mummy parts flying.



Sephira grimaced in the distance. ReDeads and Gibdos weren’t common where she was from, but she and Xavier always managed to find some. As a result, she knew what they were, and a little of how to deal with them. She stepped up to the window next to Ammy’s and started firing arrows. Seeing that Amaterasu was using bomb arrows, Sephira stopped and asked for some bombs, knowing her accuracy might be able to help deal with large groups.

“Take them all.” Amaterasu said, giving Sephira the last of her bombs before moving to a window beside her, using her Zora Boomerangs. “Arthur! We could sure use that parlilzation spell! Or Jacob! Try your fire magic!” Amaterasu shouted, catching her Boomerangs and throwing them again.



Tennor ran out holding the prize of his searches; a cucoo. He heard the others laughing, but he knew his plan would work. Tennor used the chicken as a shield, no teeth able to penetrate its impossible skin. When it turned red, he chucked the fowl away, and sprinted back inside. Locking the zombies outside with the maddened cucoo. “Let the carnage begin!” He chortled, watching out the window as the cucoo made quick work of the ReDeads and Gibdos.



Ammy caught her Boomerangs once more, and was about to throw them again when she saw a red cucoo flying around, attacking the zombies. Slamming her window shut, she pulled Sephira away from the window, and closed that one as well.“Look,” Amaterasu said, pointing out the window when Sephira began to argue. Then she checked to see how many arrows she had left. “Crap. I only have three arrows left. I’ll have to get some rocks and sticks to make more in the morning.”

Tennor yelped aloud for two reasons. One was because the plan he’d created actually worked. The second was because he heard a loud moan coming from around the corner in the hall. And he was out of cucoos. Sephira had fired off three arrows with the bomb on them when Ammy pulled her away. Confused, she started to argue when she heard a squawk. An evil grin spread across her face. A cucoo had been launched. Counting her remaining arrows, Sephira found she had six left and groaned.

She too would have to fashion one out of the old arrows’ iron heads and attach them to new bodies. She turned to a bed, wishing Ammy and the others a good night. Amaterasu killed the ReDead in the corner Tennor heard with another arrow, and used her boomerangs to finish off the rest of them outside. Turning to address the group, she said, “I think we need to all rest now.” And that was all she said before an arrow caught her in the leg and she fell to the ground, hitting her head and knocking herself unconscious.
 
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Yay! It finally has its own forum! It is now offical that turning a RPG into a fan-fic is an awesome idea!
 

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okay, the next chapter is not being updated until i get back to mah house. i dont' have teh document on this computer. :P
 
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Well, you wanted comments, so here's a few for you-

I find this extremely hard to read. You have basically typed this up as one giant paragraph with little to no spacing between different scenes or lines of dialogue. As the reader, I should not have to squint my eyes just to figure out what's what in your story. I suggest you go back and put proper spacing between paragraphs and dialogue.

While I'm on that subject, dialogue goes on a new paragraph, and any action proceeding afterwards needs to go on a new paragraph. Fix the spacing, and I'll take a look at this again. :>
 

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It looked fine on Microsoft Word but it doesn't always work when i copy and paste it. I didn't make this all from memory, this is based of the RPG in the forum games. I'm sorry that you have to squint but i will try to fix the indentations. that is my personal style of writing BTW. if you have to squint then i'll try to make the font bigger as well.
 
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It looked fine on Microsoft Word but it doesn't always work when i copy and paste it. I didn't make this all from memory, this is based of the RPG in the forum games. I'm sorry that you have to squint but i will try to fix the indentations. that is my personal style of writing BTW. if you have to squint then i'll try to make the font bigger as well.

Yeah, when it comes to copying writing, Word is as bad as they come. When I type up my stories, I don't even use Word. I realize you're just putting an RP in story form, but not even making the font size bigger is going to fix this- it's an issue of spacing, not font size. By "squint", it means I'm having to exert a lot of energy just to be able to tell the difference between the narrative and dialogue. In other words... this is a giant wall of text. Nobody likes reading a wall of text. I'm sure if you fixed the spacing, you would get the comments you're looking for. :>
 

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THEN YOU FIX THE SPACING! GOSH! I'm sorry but i really can't fix this. It's your problem if you don't like this.
 
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THEN YOU FIX THE SPACING! GOSH! I'm sorry but i really can't fix this. It's your problem if you don't like this.
This is your story, and therefore your work. I'm not going to fix this for you, and neither is anyone else. It's a really simple problem to fix (just hit Enter/Return twice after a paragraph or dialogue).

Also, there was no need to yell at me. If you cannot learn to take constructive criticism like this, your writing is going to suffer, regardless of whatever "style" you wish to use.

Have a nice day.
 

amaterasu

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I can take constructive critisism but after i try to fix it and you still say it's wrong, then i get mad. my writing does not suck and never has nor will ever suck. I can read between the lines.
 
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I can take constructive critisism but after i try to fix it and you still say it's wrong, then i get mad. my writing does not suck and never has nor will ever suck. I can read between the lines.
Thing is, I didn't say your writing sucked. I came here to offer advice for improvement. You already have it on the forum, so just edit your posts and hit return twice after a paragraph. "Reading between the lines" has nothing to do with this issue; being able to tell paragraphs apart... is. I see you went back into your most recent chapter and changed it, but you should probably go back and do the same thing in Chapters 1 and 2 as well.
 
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i did. refresh the page again.

Yes, I see you fixed that. That's a step in the right direction. This is already looking a lot better already! Thank you for fixing that.

Now you just need to put the proper spacing for your lines of dialogue. They go on new paragraphs, too. :>
 

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meh. it's fine. i kinda like it that way actually. idk when i'lll be able to post another chapter, but i've been slacking on writing as well. : P
 

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