Myriadviper42
Fulcrum Agent
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Well, one of the less interesting chapters, but still fine.
Zelda Art Adventure Of Shad
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Raindrop14
Soldier for Christ!
Cool chapter.
I like it how I get to be in the sage relm all the time whenever Shad goes to the sage relm.
I like it how I get to be in the sage relm all the time whenever Shad goes to the sage relm.
blue-eyes
Phoenix
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Eh your the sage of forest and first sage met. you will always be there to splain wut to do
blue-eyes
Phoenix
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I am sorry for the delay, i wanted to post it last night but my internet went down. I will try to do 2 chapters today and maybe try to get chapter a day
“This mountain is huge!” Mirrom said after scaling the mountain for half an hour. “We should take a break.”
“Okay, let’s stop” Shad said, sitting on a small rock. There were multiple paths going up, but the group was on the main one. All paths were barren, so there wasn’t much scenery. The group made idle chitchat, and then a blue crablike monster about 2 feet tall called a tektite jumped from higher on the mountain.
Shad drew his bow, and time seemed to slow around him. The tektite was almost frozen, and Shad shot. Time resumed its normal speed, and the tektite had an arrow in it.
“I can’t believe that I can slow time,” Shad muttered to himself. Just then, Shad heard footsteps. He drew his swords, and using his ability to hide in shadows, got right next to the noise maker.
He looked the same age as Shad, was wearing a silver tunic, and his brown hair was a little above his shoulders. He was walking with his two hunting knives in his hands, his bow and quiver on his back. Suddenly, he struck.
Shad narrowly dodged the knives, and swung an overhead strike. He blocked by crossing his knives at the place Shad swung, but got his in the side by Shad’s other blades.
He fell instantly, bleeding and knocked out. Shad picked him up and brought him to the place that the group was sitting. Mirrom healed him, and he woke up. They group learned his name was
Elliot and he wanted to go to Kakariko Village. They let him go, with Shad saying how he didn’t want to kill him.
The group started walking up the mountain, the sun at its high point. Suddenly, a giant Dragon swooped down lower in the mountain, and the group heard Elliot scream
Chapter 16: Elliot
“This mountain is huge!” Mirrom said after scaling the mountain for half an hour. “We should take a break.”
“Okay, let’s stop” Shad said, sitting on a small rock. There were multiple paths going up, but the group was on the main one. All paths were barren, so there wasn’t much scenery. The group made idle chitchat, and then a blue crablike monster about 2 feet tall called a tektite jumped from higher on the mountain.
Shad drew his bow, and time seemed to slow around him. The tektite was almost frozen, and Shad shot. Time resumed its normal speed, and the tektite had an arrow in it.
“I can’t believe that I can slow time,” Shad muttered to himself. Just then, Shad heard footsteps. He drew his swords, and using his ability to hide in shadows, got right next to the noise maker.
He looked the same age as Shad, was wearing a silver tunic, and his brown hair was a little above his shoulders. He was walking with his two hunting knives in his hands, his bow and quiver on his back. Suddenly, he struck.
Shad narrowly dodged the knives, and swung an overhead strike. He blocked by crossing his knives at the place Shad swung, but got his in the side by Shad’s other blades.
He fell instantly, bleeding and knocked out. Shad picked him up and brought him to the place that the group was sitting. Mirrom healed him, and he woke up. They group learned his name was
Elliot and he wanted to go to Kakariko Village. They let him go, with Shad saying how he didn’t want to kill him.
The group started walking up the mountain, the sun at its high point. Suddenly, a giant Dragon swooped down lower in the mountain, and the group heard Elliot scream
Ganondork
goo
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Hmmm, your last few chapters - which regretfully I fell back on reading - have been rather dry and uninteresting. You need to better explain all that it happening, because sometimes I have no idea what it is you're talking about. Remember that we don't have all the thoughts that you're having, so you have to make it understandable to us.
blue-eyes
Phoenix
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Ok, thanks Ganondork, I will try harder to make it better.