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  1. Mamono101

    Mellow Ezlo attempts that writing thing...

    I think it’s pretty decent for an opener, but that does also depend on who you’re intending the audience to be. I agree with Mikey that the overall tone feels like it’s for a younger audience, and if that is your goal, then the opening is definitely decent. I also think the overall concept...
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